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Re: Singer's Choice
LOL! AWESOME! I LOVE IT! Ok... problems... problems... argh i'm hopeless at creative citisizing, you'll just have to wait for someone else to. I liked the way you used colons ...
May 30, 2005 -
Re: Speech: My Hero is
Wow, that was, well, I could relate to it... It could have been written better, but I know English isn't your primary language.
May 30, 2005 -
Re: The Wanderings Part 1 (so far)
Added an un-finished prologue. And Ray, I still haven't finished part 1 :lol:
May 30, 2005 -
Re: This is Not the End
I didn't really get it to be honest, it didn't make sense to me. Not much anyway
May 29, 2005 -
Re: Maybe
Uh... All of the above...
May 24, 2005 -
Re: Falling
Yes, it did remind me of that song everybodies been mentioning... But not the same, just similar.
May 24, 2005 -
Re: attempt to appear older (+13)
Doesn't anyone get it? I think I know what you were getting at. And the swearing does seem right.
May 22, 2005 -
Re: Prose: "Chronicles of the Dhampir: Emergence"
Yes, post the next part, cause I love this story so far.
May 20, 2005 -
Re: Infinite Moment
All of the above Awesomeness.
May 14, 2005 -
Re: Freewrite--"the Break"
Deep... I'm not too good with helping people with their writing, so I can't help you in that part of this.
May 13, 2005 -
Re: September 11
I got up early in the morning to watch TV, the news was on, I saw the twin towers had been decimated. To be honest I didn't care then, and ...
May 6, 2005 -
Re: The Intruder
I like, I like a lot. I can't tell you why I like it, but I do. Um, you might want to specify what type of shotgun that is, some ...
Apr 29, 2005 -
Re: Rain Before Dawn, Chapter 4
This part seems a little, fast paced, you're making it like my story! TOO FAST PACED!
Apr 24, 2005 -
Re: Prologue of MY STORY
Everything Griffin said, even though it sounds familiar *Cough*Snoink*cough*
Apr 23, 2005 -
Re: Rain Before Dawn, Chapter 3- part 2
Eh, so so, it's alright. I'm hopeless at saying why I like and dislike things so don't ask.
Apr 18, 2005